I never wanted to let you go
However I remained in this pain
What is it that I'm hurt about?
Is it because I'm lonely without you?
Even if I count all the stars at night
I end up relating all the stars to your beauty
My mind lights up with thoughts of you
Yet it cries because you never came back to me
The silence that lies in my huge smile
Lies a deeply hurt and dark lonely man
Who knows how I continue to live like this
But my heart is cutting itself into pieces
Tears that are flowing from my eyes
They never stop but only continue
Deep in my eyes where the ocean resides
Where storms of pain create tsunamis within
Nobody understands this pain I feel
Everyone tells me to forget and move on
If your really want me to move on
Take me to a place where she doesn't exist
As I light this lamp of fire without you
I don't understand one important thing
Am I lighting up my own funeral pyre?
Or am I dreaming of my own death?Rahul N. Singh
time for a therapy. Otherwise you`ll get deep depressions and thats dangerous. Try to let someone -professional- help you.Why don`t you ?
ReplyDeleteHi.
ReplyDeletePersonally speaking you don't know me enough to say I need therapy. What you read on this blog is creative. It is not realistic. Not every poem will have a significant meaning. If I write about aliens it would not necessarily mean that I believe they exist. Or if I write about a murderer, it generally does not mean that I am a murderer does it?
So I would like to say to you in a nice way...I don't need 'professional' help. So no...I don't want or need professional help. I find it rather rude for you to even say that without knowing me.
Anyway...I praise your comment because it shows that I wrote a poem convincingly enough for you to believe that I am writing the poem based on experience.
So thank you for the comment and 'advise'.
Rahul
i bag you pardon it was due to the last 2 lines in ypur poem and it was worring to read that.
ReplyDeleteI thought its personal and realistc.
A poem is always meant to be hard-hitting and it is meant to make an impression.
ReplyDeleteI like the fact that I was able to make it look personal and realistic but as a writer, i try to enter new depths of my creativity and the last two lines just to justice to that.
Thanks again
Rahul